Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer.
It is true that climate affects the way people live. While some individuals desire to stay in a place where it is warmer, others reside in a much colder environment. Although there are good points supporting each side, I like icy-cold weathers better.
There are several benefits of living in a country with a warm climate. First, as most of its days are bright and pleasant, people tend to be more physically active as they enjoy outdoor activities ranging from climbing mountains to simply taking the dogs for a walk along the park. Second, having the freedom to wear less clothing such as short sleeves and sandals on hot and humid weathers allows them to increase their savings. This saved budget can then be used for their next holiday vacation like in a summer tropical island where they can bask under the sun’s heat together with friends and families. Finally, many experts believed that people who live in sunniest nations produce high levels of Vitamin D, which is vital to promoting bone health.
However, it is understandable why some people have this inclination toward colder climates. As they relish the warmth of their cozy blankets and heater every freezing night, sleep is much comfortable, and this could improve sleeping habits. Another advantage of living in a subfreezing temperature areas is that it may reduce allergies since pollens are virtually nonexistent in these places, improving the quality of life of individuals with asthma or hay fever. Furthermore, a study conducted in Canada, a country with mostly subzero weathers, found that employees increase their productivity by 30% during heavy snows and this may be due to enhanced activation of the brain whenever it is exposed to extremely cold weather. It is no wonder why such nation is among the top five list of countries with highest gross income.
In conclusion, each climate has its own positives and it is only up to people’s preference that will be the main factor on where to live. As a sleepyhead person with an allergy, I would rather reside in a country with cold seasons than staying in a place that always have heatwaves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, then, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98603351955 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62429684457 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639664804469 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1368727025 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213800140465 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068726235551 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476699463674 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125809156707 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307757485329 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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