Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in a apartment?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Apartment or a separate house, it has achieved a crucial component of decision-making, while shortlisting an ideal place to live in, which has been duly recognized by many property website and, accordingly, introduced a filter in their websites. There are hefty numbers of crowed having inclination towards a house over apartment, which many not be in line with the people standing on the other side of the corner and having their owned set of merits of living in an apartment. When we list down, we feel, advantages of living in a house, somehow, outweighs its disadvantageous.
Firstly, positive side of staying in a house can be demonstrated by quantum of freed extended by it to the people living underneath on roof. Any joint family can stay in an independent house, sharing their precious life moments, leaving unforgettable memories in their life diary. An independent house extends personalized appeal and provided an opportunity to customize your dream home by introducing greenery to your lawn, having a dedicated playing area for the outdoor activities, which many a dream in an apartment. You may have an opportunity to welcome morning sunrise with fresh air, by sitting in your lawn with an added incentives of gardening in it.
On the contrary, nothing remains untouched by the other side of the coin, accordingly, a standalone home does carries certain demerits along with it. An idea of individual apartment picked up its heat with the rapid and dramatic changes in size of families, which makes a house a costly affair in comparison to apartment. Nuclear families enhance demand for security and safety, wherein, an apartment fits in a better mode against a house. Larger size of an independent villa requires higher monetary and physical resources to maintain, which can easily be avoided by investing in an apartment. Moreover, having a close look on bright side of apartment, we may find that it grants more opportunities to interact with good and quality surrounding, which is, somehow, missing in a villa.
Above provided a close juxtaposition between positive and negative side of a house. Having an in depth analysis of pros and cons, we can conclude that variety and quality of benefits achieved out of an independent house outweighs the majority of monetary and secondary benefits achieved by an apartment. A house can provide a healthy lifestyle, and brings more piece and relaxation to once life with an emotional touch of togetherness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12376237624 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98943094629 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534653465347 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4900214409 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9333333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280692972721 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942148177363 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499433361457 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176628379774 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725285686657 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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