some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartmen
Nowadays,many people have different mindset. It is observe that people choose living home or apartment their own budget. However, there are many pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reason which are popular and some of the challenges to be overcome.
Lets begin by looking at the advantages of living in a house. One of the most positive reasons is that we have own parking area. What I mean by this is that when we coming to the home, no worry about parking, For instance, when guest is coming to their house, they have no worry about parking, This can make us easiest life.
Secondly, living in a apartment is much affordable rather then home. Take British people as an example. They have no stress about building maintenance. The owner of the building take responsibilities of all matters.
Turning to the other sides of argument, In house we have no security such as guard, To be more precise, thief can easily comes in house. In apartment could be noisy sometime, it is a safe place to live in.
Another issue is that apartment building is owned by a housing estate company and many flats live together. In other words, they reduce the freedom for apartment owners.
By way of conclusion, it is a fact that people have their own preferences and opinions about the type of properties they would like to choose, From my perspective that the advantages of living in a house are greater then disadvantages to purchase a house rather than to purchase an flat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i mean, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69288389513 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59897029214 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543071161049 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.7384487084 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3125 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305960757827 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951507038438 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881395415353 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15951625559 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646667864101 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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