Some people prefer to live in a house, while others think that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages to living in a house rather than in an apartment?
Increasing population has surge the demand for houses and apartments. Moreover, most of the houses are getting constructed to multi-storey apartments to sky-heights as demand is rising further. People argue that living in houses has more advantages than in apartments. The pros and cons of both living parameters are discussed in this essay.
On one hand, houses are quite big in area and also density of people living in houses is comparatively lesser. Additionally, the space can be designed as per once compatibility and beliefs to suit their living character. To illustrate, the bungalows are known for their aesthetic and build quality as per owners choice, requirement and financial capabilities, also having a personal gym, pool or study room is an added advantage for the well-being of the family. As well as the restrictions are lesser, such as gardening, having pets, etc.
On the other hand, apartments has less space but are equipped with all the essential equipments required for daily chores. There are multiple families leaving on singe floor, owing to this, festivals of different cultures and traditions are often celebrated together. Indian societies are great example, where most of the celebration occurs together, showing a sign of great unity and bonding among multiple religions. Furthermore, the apartments have modern security systems and relatively better secured from thefts and burglars, even when the family is out for vacation.
Soothing nature of houses are evident and beneficial for relieving from stressful life, however, with spike in crime rates and people getting depressed and lonelier, apartments can be more advantageous, where neighbours can quickly help and support, and make you feel like a family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27472527473 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76322099203 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 273.0 20.2975951904 1345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1440.0 106.682146367 1350% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 273.0 20.7667163134 1315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 95.0 7.06120827912 1345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314177027892 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.314177027892 0.084324248473 373% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187750968325 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133114865497 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 139.9 13.0946893788 1068% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -214.08 50.2224549098 -426% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 110.9 11.3001002004 981% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.77 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.57 8.58950901804 251% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 111.2 10.1190380762 1099% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 111.0 10.7795591182 1030% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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