Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Since individuals worked extremely hard outside of their houses, they have desired to own comfortable dwelling in order to having melted down their tension on day to day lives. Meanwhile, although some of them would rather stay in a house where they would not have any neighbors, others have been wishing to live in apartments where they could be able to know many other people as their neighbors. I myself have believed humans who have been living in houses have had more beneficial effects on their lives than drawbacks.
First of all, as like other topics, which some people have occurred with but others have not, this view would have both agreements and opposed thoughts. Thorough all these years, the places where people have wanted to live have altered in many ways. Moreover, they have had diverse choices to take their interested ones. But between the varieties of choices, the favorite ones have been houses and apartments. Actually, houses have had more beneficial effects not only on people’s mood, but also on their behavior and personalities. Indeed, if a person lives in a house for a while, she or he will be able to feel more relaxed than others. Furthermore, most of the houses have gardens even small ones which could be extremely effective to cheer people up just by watching them.
In addition, drawbacks of living in houses could not be overlooked. These disadvantages such as feeling lonely, having nobody to help you in emergencies and also more chances to get robbed. But in spite of these drawbacks which may not be felt while living in apartments, houses have affected on individuals’ lives more effectively. For example, having no neighbors has propelled people to own much more relaxing lives because they have not shared their dwellings with no one else. As a result, they have been able to do their duties whenever they want as well as making as much as noises they want without concerning about others to be annoyed.
In conclusion, every type of residential places have had some enthusiasts. For that reason, this opinion could not be allocate to all the people. But in general living in houses without any neighbors and also having even small gardens, have had more benefits than apartments for individuals. So this has led people to choose houses in order to own calm accommodations in most of their selects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...uld not have any neighbors, others have been wishing to live in apartments where they could ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92713567839 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58053901081 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502512562814 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9253458469 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.210526316 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5789473684 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269203587398 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11214596328 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931569601027 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205681956358 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259606821982 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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