Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
With the increasing urbanisation, the space for the living is lacking and thus a large number of people are opting to Iive in an apartment. However, some people still prefer to live in a house. I also agree with the latter statement. This essay will explore the merits of owning a house over a flat.
To begin with, houses have more space or land, as compared to an apartment. People can build up the home according to their needs. For instance, if the family is big and more rooms are required, then they can construct, with regard to members choice. But, in a flat, you cannot modify it , relation to person's own wish. Living in a house can give human beings vmore privacy and space, which they could not get by having a flat, there is always alot of people to listen your personal stuffs and all
Moreover, the folk having a house, can sell it any cost later, because proce of a house increase rapidly as compared to an apartment. It means tgat house owner could get a higher capital gain. In addition to this, maintaince charges of a house is less than a flat. As, in an apartment, you have to pay for maintaince fees, parking, any entertainment activity, security and many more. Further, a house owner full enjoy his/her freedom, whereas, an apartment building is owned by housing estate, where many flat owners live together, so they cannot enjoy liberty.
Despite all the advantage of house, some people preferred to own a flat, because of its less maintenance and cost. If the family is small, they go for an apartment to live in, which gives them more security as some gate security guard is always present outside the building. But these advantages are less as in relation to disadvantages of having an apartment.
To recapitulate, depends upon the person's need and preference, also their income, it totally their choice to opt for a house or a flat. But, I would always prefer to own a house, because of its merits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...pace for the living is lacking and thus a large number of people are opting to Iive in an apartme...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ce. But, in a flat, you cannot modify it , relation to persons own wish. Living in...
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Line 7, column 306, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...building. But these advantages are less as in relation to disadvantages of having ...
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Line 9, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...t. To recapitulate, depends upon the persons need and preference, also their income,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, whereas, for instance, in addition, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65014577259 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50302514374 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533527696793 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7529955723 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6111111111 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39003322393 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118336013198 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917449940471 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225505238312 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967652635576 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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