Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
The world is divided into individuals who try to stay in the same and usual circumstances and to prevent serious changes in their lives, and other people who believe that doesn’t matter which changes lead to the better.
On the one hand, it’s clearly understandable, why particular kind of people is afraid of changes. They are used to do the same actions again and again. Every new day is like the day before. The next period is like many previous periods throughout the years. That situation is convenient and allows predicting the nearest future and planning the next steps. Majority of elder generation prefer to live in that way, avoiding changes and knowing what to expect ahead.
On the other hand, life surround is extremely intensive and changeable. Nowadays technologies and developments lead to changes in all aspects of life. Everything was transformed, the way we had lived, the educational system, the diet, the fashion and many other components of life. For instance, in our days people have a mostly sedentary lifestyle and consume a lot of unhealthy and harmful food. To compensate for the lake of moving and to keep fit, people have to attend jams or make another variable sports activities. In the past humanity had worked harder and mainly physical jobs, so they didn’t need additional sports activities. Also, they had eaten healthy food with many fruits and vegetables. However, they suffered from a lake of spare time and quality rest.
In conclusion, the world is changing constantly. Humanity can’t stay in the same circumstances and continue to behave in the same way. Even people, who don’t like changes, have to match their lives to the new reality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to doing'.
Suggestion: used to doing
...f people is afraid of changes. They are used to do the same actions again and again. Every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09964412811 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76306504413 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597864768683 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2300082494 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6111111111 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120227213721 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338299480347 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359146623366 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796084653014 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025850804556 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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