Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Undeniably, every person has a different way of living life. Some people believe that doing the same tasks repeatedly is joyful, whereas others argue that life should be spent trying out different things. In this essay, I will explore both viewpoints as well as my own opinion.
To begin with, performing the same steps each day makes us experts in that activity. As a result, it becomes challenging for others to beat us at that task. For example, my uncle has won various writing competitions because he is a writer and writes every day as a professional. Furthermore, it aids in saving people's time. When we do some work on a daily basis, we acquire mastery in that skill, which consequently saves us time. My mother, for instance, has been cooking for us for the past several years, and thus she takes half the time as mine to prepare dishes.
On the flip side, some individuals are enthusiastic and prefer to do something unique each day. Therefore, they learn more as they put their hands in different jobs every day, which takes their learning graph up. Children, for example, are sometimes taken to railway stations, vegetable markets, and so on by schools so that they can learn each day. Moreover, your uniqueness in life will help you stay cheerful and positive as a person. That is why it is suggested that adults take a break from their monotonous routine every six months to feel relaxed, which exemplifies my above point.
To sum up, doing same things may have its own benefits, though, in my perspective life is all about learning and gaining new experiences. Hence, one should endeavour to explore new things to stay happy and delightful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80139372822 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59751365292 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637630662021 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8290723043 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3125 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149570540258 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476795555849 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379103188067 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962724795009 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043289647328 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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