A museum near your home is looking for people to do part time unpaid work. You would like to do voluntary work at the museum.
Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the work.
explain why you to do unpaid work at the museum
describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful
give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Sir or Madam,
Recently I came to know through newspaper that you require people to do part-time job in your museum. I am a university student and consider myself fit for the work you are looking for.
To begin with, my summer vacations has just started and I have got a project on local history as homework. This would be the best opportunity to see museum closely and learn about the native's history. I have got extremely good English speaking skill which can be beneficial for you. I can serve the role of guide to tourists who are keen to know the history. Not only English, But also I can communicate in French. Therefore, French tourists can also be entertained in my presence.
You can mark my availability from next week onwards as I am going on a short trip with my family this week.
I would be highly obliged if I get to hear from you. Looking forward for a positive response and to become the asset for your museum
Thanks
Sanya
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'natives'' or 'native's'?
Suggestion: natives'; native's
... see museum closely and learn about the natives history. I have got extremely good Engl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53448275862 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48215323611 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.3704051173 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.7272727273 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242530075476 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833350896358 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876400827394 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168120317001 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136532548488 0.0580467560999 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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