Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even a useful educational tool. Others however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
Video games are meant to be played in leisure time and to rejuvenate people. Shockingly, this entertainment has become business for many people and this is seen to be encroaching in the field of education. However, I strongly agree that disadvantages of playing video games does not outweigh the advantages. This will be proven by understanding the innovative benefits that it offer to youngsters and the controlled drawbacks that it inevitably has.
On one side, video games when played excessively can disrort the visibility and distract the players as well. A few might disagree that some video games are addictive and waste precious time of teenagers. Beside this, continuoue exposure to television is proven to lower down the visibility of players, which has lead to the trend of eye glasses at the age of four. Therefore, the negative ramifications that result from an addiction of video games are evident.
On the other hand, video games can also benefit players in many ways. It is no surprise that games are an effective medium to broaden the imagination of growing children. While this trend of playing video games is positive grown over a decade, many educational institute have incorporated this to effectively educate children. Besides this, many rehabilitation centres and hospitals have adapted it as a part of therapy and witnessed the fast paced recovery of patients. As the invention of video games have it's presence in diversified domains, it is certain that it will continue to benefit millions of people.
After understanding the both sides of an argument, it is felt that this invention has brought the radical outcomes in many fields and should be encouraged with limited access to children. Also, it is obvious that both merits and demirts should be treated equally. To limit the undesirable and unintended outcome of video games, it is hoped that parents should take stringent actions against their children if they are playing excessively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.171875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86423084953 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55625 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.547888035 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350843452132 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127268797797 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936199119101 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207432958081 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952950118928 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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