Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is argued that advertisements lead people to purchase products that are not always necessary. While others believe advertisements are a way to get informed about new products that will enhance their way of living. I strongly agree with the latter and the essay will highlight the reasons.
Advertisements inform consumers about new products that can save time and money. Customers become aware of the benefits they can get and be able to compare similar products. For example, recent study on headphones are shown people are more inclined to opt for bluetooth headsets than the wired ones, due to the ease of use and no entangled wires.
In addition, advertisements provide consumers with a variety of options to choose from. As a result, consumers can compare the products with their preferred brands and make the choices based on the pros and cons of the product. For example, it was found that when consumers were informed that parachute oil improved hair strength without making the hair feels sticky, many people shifted from their usual preference of oil to the new one. The brand gained popularity quickly for this one factor.
In a nutshell, advertisements helps customer save time and money as well as provide them with the number of options to choose from, kuch not only makes life easier but also improve the standard of living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...products that are not always necessary. While others believe advertisements are a way...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01777777778 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62767794032 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8792120112 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.636363636 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173765850222 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704887927848 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400870006826 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106428539261 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379576478939 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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