Advertisement is one of the easiest ways to inform about a product to a mass population. Although in some cases an ad can be used to represent misleading information about a product, proper use of ads can have a significant positive impact on our lives. As a result, I strongly agree with the viewpoint that advertisements can help us to maintain a better lifestyle.
First of all, ads can be used to promote health products such as new medicines. For example, if a preventive measure for AIDS is invented then ads can play a leading role to disseminate this information all around the world. Furthermore, we saw in the past that television, Internet, and newspaper were used to inform people about SWINE flu which prevented an epidemic. Also, these days ads have been used to inform people about dangers involved in smoking. These ads are placed on the cigarette packets, advertised in the television or FM radio. This is a good use of ads and created an awareness among the people to realize how harmful smoking is and the risks involved with it. Due to this cautiousness, people have started quitting smoking which has contributed to our better health.
Moreover, ads are used to promote advanced products that implement state of the art technologies. For instance, in television and Internet (e.g., youtube) we see ads for home surveillance systems and Google Home manager. These products can enhance our safety and security as well as can contribute to better living by assisting in managing our homes. Without the advertisements about these products, they would have remained unknown.
In conclusion, there are more advantages than cons of advertisements. Thus, I strongly support the idea that ads can help us for a better lifestyle and healthy practices.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4593639576 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08217965692 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6206557646 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.846153846 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193399922728 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069431962512 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689165967506 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12227332432 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592663993691 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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