SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT ARTISTS SUCH AS PAINTERS, WRITERS AND
MUSICIANS AFFECT OUR LIFE MORE THAN SCIENTISTS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU
AGREE OR DISAGREE? GIVE REASONS FOR YOUR ANSWER AND INCLUDE RELEVANT
EXAMPLES FROM YOUR EXPERIENCE
Few individuals narrate that artists like painters writers as well as magicians have more influence on our life in comparison to the scientists. I completely agree to the conviction because we deal regularly with them in our routine and their activities are more visible in respect to the researchers.
To embark upon, with the growing time and hectic schedule our dependencies on each other has increased. Moreover, these days everyone is dependent on one another to accomplish various goals. Likewise, life is not exciting without music, people rejuvenate themselves by visiting various concerts. For instance, children are more affected by the singers. Their glamour as well as glittering career is an impetus for them to perform well in the same field. Similarly, those who do the jobs like whitewash makes our houses of public places ardent as well as amazing with colours. While, interesting books and stories help society in understanding as well as in espousing different cultures, values from the world. Furthermore, these all makes life of the humans vibrant and exciting.
However, contribution of the science and its drivers cannot be ignored at the same juncture. To elucidate, world does integrated together and is all due to the numerous invention provided by the scientist to the mankind. Besides this, there are several ways by which they have made our life easy.
To conclude, I believe that contribution of all of them is significant for the human being. But at the same time inter dependencies on various professional artists is more and have wider impact. They bring value and influence frequently to the individuals in the daily routine.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, similarly, so, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18959107807 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84815625097 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7417481431 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.25 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141225048448 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435097975473 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436401422706 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811167532216 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410635658846 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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