Nowadays, people move from one country to the other for finding jobs. Some people think children of these families suffer because of this, while others think it is helpful for them. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Retail outlets should prioritise selling food prepared in the home country rahter than the one which is imported from other countries. I completely agree with the statement because most of the eatables are always with short shelf life and contains plethora of preservatives which are harmful for the health.
Social media has taken the awareness about any sector to the next level. People are familiar with international cuisine and has developed a taste as well as a preference for the same in the recent time. However, there are numerous disadvantages in eating and selling such snacks. Firstly, import duty is imposed on such goods by the government, simultaneously, making it expensive than the locally prepared items. Secondly, economy of the country is impacted with the burden of foreign exchange. Moreover, process of distribution is very large and scattered over different places. Therefore, long time is taken by the goods to arrive at their destination and due to which quality of the products get deteriorated . They are further placed in refrigerators in order to maintain the nutritive value.
These products contain high value of chemicals which have detrimental effects on the health of young children. Thus, making them vulnerable to several diseases. Besides this, immune system of the consumers become weak over the period of time.
On the other hand,shopkeepers also have to make huge investment to store and maintain these items while a locally prepared food will be consumed within itself life and are more profitable. They are also rich in proteins and other essential nutritions.
In conclusion, it is well understood that local food items are more advantageous from health economy and cost perspective. Therefore, vendors should be encouraged to procure or produce homemade food items rather than the prepared and packed in some other country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37373737374 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83826765015 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1140158038 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8823529412 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14604805484 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381052500478 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036316041879 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778313638172 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238520754106 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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