Nowadays, people move from one country to the other for finding jobs. Some people think children of these families suffer because of this, while others think it is helpful for them. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Retail outlet s should prioritize selling food prepared in the home country rather than the one which is imported from other countries. I completely agree with the statement because most of eatables are always with short shelf life and contains plethora of preservatives which are harmful for the health.
Social media has taken the awareness about any sector to the next level. People are familiar with international cuisine and has developed a taste as well as a preference for the same in the recent time. However, there are numerous disadvantages in eating and selling such snacks. Firstly, import duty is imposed on such goods by the government, simultaneously, making it expensive than the locally prepared items. Secondly, economy of the country is impacted with the burden of foreign exchange. Moreover, process of distribution is very large and scattered over different places. Therefore, a long time is taken by the goods to arrive at their destination and due to which quality of the products gets deteriorated . They are further placed in refrigerators in order to maintain the nutritive value.
These products contain high value of chemicals which have detrimental effects on the health of young children. does making them vulnerable to several diseases. is immune system of the consumer's becomes weak over the period of time.
On the other hand, shopkeepers also have to make huge investment to store and maintain these items while a locally prepared food will be consumed within it's shelf life and are more profitable. They are also rich in proteins and other essential nutritions.
In conclusion, it is well understood that local food items are more advantageous from health, economy and cost perspective. Therefore vendors should be encouraged to procure or produce homemade food items rather than the prepared and packed in some other country
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the eatables') or simply say ''most eatables''.
Suggestion: most of the eatables; most eatables
...letely agree with the statement because most of eatables are always with short shelf life and co...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uality of the products gets deteriorated . They are further placed in refrigerator...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Does
...ffects on the health of young children. does making them vulnerable to several disea...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
...ng them vulnerable to several diseases. is immune system of the consumers becomes ...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... of the consumers becomes weak over the period of time. On the other hand, shopkeepers also...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...m health, economy and cost perspective. Therefore vendors should be encouraged to procure...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26086956522 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80010118865 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9185112643 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5294117647 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139301987872 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364589188726 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372530535258 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745719842285 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260670528144 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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