Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
Few guardians purchase a lot of toys for playing for their children. There are merits and demerits as well in doing so.
Toys have become an essential for the young children as they find the only source of entertainment in their early days. With the advent of technology, a plethora of toys are available in the market, similarly, helps the to utilize their leisure time and at the same time, there are toys which promotes and builds creativity among adolescent. Moreover, they feel enthusiastic after possessing them and also rejuvenate them. While parents express their love and affection towards their offspring's by offering them a wide collection of toys. Additionally, there are toys which introduce them to the technology and gradually over the period of time enhances the analytical skills of the teenagers. Beside this, it is the golden period of human beings life, so most of the individuals put efforts to make it memorable for their children.
However, there are certain cons of having numerous toys.Firstly, it increases financial burden on parents while at the same time too many toys make adverse impact on the mental health of the students. Furthermore, they gets distracted towards them,simultaneously, affecting their studies negatively. Apart from this, modern toys lacks in the physical involvement. Likewise, causing diseases like visual impairment. Undoubtedly, they end up loosing the valuable time and moving them towards obsolescence.
To conclude, it is good to have few toys with children but proving the a wide variety will make them maverick and will have negative effects on their future as well as career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, similarly, so, thus, well, while, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25475285171 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90763914455 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2224825902 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204824331454 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719480514353 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711078015983 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142209116776 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469459101631 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.