SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THE BEST WAY TO IMPROVE PUBLIC HEALTH IS BY INCREASING THE NUMBER OF SPORTS FACILITIES. OTHERS, HOWEVER, SAY THAT THIS WOULD HAVE LITTLE EFFECT ON PUBLIC HEALTH AND THAT OTHER MEASURES ARE REQUIRED.
DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
Nowadays, we know that we need to mind our health but sometimes we must face many obstacles to reach our goal. Some simple and basic cautions are sufficient to guarantee a good health as a wholesome food, sleep quality, water consumption, routine examination besides the practice of exercises.
Many people believe that facilitating the access to sports is enough to get better public health but I believe that this way is not the exclusive thing to think about it. It is clear that increasing the number of sports facilities will help to improve public health because the practice of exercises is really important. Spending energy and keeping our bodies in movement is extremely beneficial to physical and psychological health, but this is not all, we should not just consider our need for healthcare.
Furthermore, we must know the necessity to go to the doctor regularly for check-ups at least once a year due to various diseases are noiseless and don’t have any symptoms. Another thing that we need to be careful is with the water consumption because the water helps to maintain our organism hydrated and actuate in all bodily functions.
Moreover, the healthy diet is highly relevant to achieve and hold better health. And last but not least, the quality of sleep deeply influences our daily lives.
In short, If we do all the things mentioned above, I believe that this would have a huge effect on public health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, another thing, at least, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95833333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66796843226 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6509772893 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192417560101 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816345208446 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078736455565 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111914894839 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906164896441 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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