Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
From Ancient times down to the present day, the fashion has always been a way of view communication, as well as in expressing personality or cultural environment.
How the person dresses, certainly, bears one part of her identity and it is capable to influence her personality. In other words, the clothes work as a species of personal brand.
The vestments may interfere in our differentiation of genders, old, social condition, besides religion. For instance, muslin women wear the burka that is a kind of clothing for identifying their religion. In addition, the use of turban in the Middle East and this accessory has enumerable manners to use representing different languages, such as for example the turban may indicate the social position, the native tribe, and his humor.
However, pretrial is always dangerous and pretentious, and we need to take care of it. I believe that we cannot measure the person’s value from your clothes or due to what this person has, the true value is the character, ideas and the nobility of principles. For instance, we cannot judge a girl that wearing a miniskirt as a prostitute or a man wearing a pink blouse is not necessarily homosexual.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that clothes and accessories do not define who are you or any person, nevertheless, it helps to establish the personal brand that you would transmit to other people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02164502165 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02864518658 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614718614719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5063362362 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8 7.06120827912 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137259589578 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468574635482 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531688464087 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770877513814 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502393700499 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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