Although many people believe that school rules should be created by children, some opine that making rules should be the responsibility of adults. In my opinion, children should be engaged in the process of making school rules and also I think that adults have more experience in it. In this essay, we are going to elaborate on both views and obtain an appropriate conclusion.
Furthermore, first and foremost, from the children's prespective, children can be trusted to make decisions in their school life. Moreover, they are a bit confident and know everything about studying at school. so, they go there every day and encounter all of the routines. If we ask them they will probably have a million suggestions. For instance, they would like to prolong the lunchtime, add some artistic subjects, and practical experiments in subjects such as physics and chemistry. As a result, it is clear seemed that this approach could also teach children to be more responsible. Therefore, adolescents will be more prepared for the grown-up life and the challenges it brings.
On the contrary, from the adult stance, adults have life experience, which provides to organize internal management considering all aspects of pupil’s needs. But also the authority of adults should not become prevalent. In addition, making decisions for kids, adults should be flexible guided by knowledge of children’s creativity, which plays an essential role in human characteristic. For example, by establishing strict rules in school children could feel lost and restricted to make their own minds. I think that if from time to time conduct surveys in schools, probably could be a good idea to find out kid’s opinion. people evolve and make progress by having bold ideas and dream big. It depicts that with the usage of essential management rules we get better results.
To conclude, I firmly consider that rules at school should be made by adults, but at the same time considering children’s point of view. Only through joint strive, we can acquire an exemplary result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16167664671 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82351045086 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5735748046 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7368421053 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47368421053 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419754087555 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117166314271 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125792591385 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275377250966 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15439997045 0.056905535591 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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