Some people say that cities are a better place for children to grow up in, while others believe countryside is the right choice. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and examples
In today's world we have a school of thought with an opinion that children are better of growing up in cities. On the other hand there are people who believe entirely differently as their preference is countryside/suburban areas for children brought up. In following few lines I will discuss both the views with some of my own experiences.
Firstly if we look at the the aspects that may have an affect over children brought up while staying in an urban area. The first and the foremost impact of city is the exposure children get here due to their interaction with people from different cultures, speaking different languages if they are staying in a metropolitan city like Karachi, NewYork and/or London. Cities also does provide a better education system as compared to suburban/countryside areas as they have better schools, colleges and universities. Another important factor that may impact children growth pattern in cities is the health sector facilities which are by far better and modern in cities. For example hospitals like Agha Khan, Liaquat National and for that instance Shoukat Khanam Cancer Hospital. All major hospitals are situated in the city areas. Cities does have better sanitation systems than a village or suburban area. Due to all these factors in my opinion cities are better place to grow your child as it opens many horizons for him/her.
On the other hand life in suburb/country side does have its merits, as the health of people living in villages is much better as compare to the people living in cities and this is due to the two different life styles people adopt in cities and countryside areas. For example, people living in villages does have more physical life styles as they mostly are associated with the profession of agriculture and they are more comfortable working with their own hands rather than machines. Secondly the food in rural areas is healthier than cities and same is the case with environment in suburban areas as they have minimum air and noise pollution in villages.
Considering all above factors life in cities does out weight the merits of living in villages, although both sides have pretty valid arguments but still from children perspective and as a parent I would rather want my child to grow up in city as compared to brought him/her up in a countryside area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, as for, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95153061224 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73607255645 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3254023964 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.4 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1333333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298735537424 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106720652281 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054706751047 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198705661915 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756956443051 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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