Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is an irrefutable fact that economics is leading the world in many ways. Despite the fact that the global economy is maintaining the balance between countries, some cite that the development of economy is imperative to irradiate the poverty in the world while others perspective is to shun the development as it is destroying the nature. I stand on the same side as the experts truly believe that it is vital to continue the development of economy as it will create more jobs and mitigate the hunger
From the dawn of industrialization the global economy is rising, but with the cost of environment as a result some people believe that this development should terminate immediately. As there is development in many areas, the cities are growing and consuming most of natural resources and forests which is leading to destruction of world’s natural heritage. Establishing new industries and factories results in most of the pollution. As per the US Pollution control board it has been estimated that 41 % of the forests are destructed for new industries which in turn results in 3 % increase in Carbon levels in atmosphere. These ultra prominent results are the concerns of many global leads for supporting to stop the economic development
On the other hand many other experts’ says that it is economic development is essential so that it will mitigate the issue of poverty. Development of economy leads to development of countries which results in creating more jobs. If there are adequate amount of jobs in a country there will be less hunger and as a result there will be less crime. Moreover if there are fewer crimes people of that country will be happy and there is a possibility of concentrating more on the environment. Take Japan for instance it is contributing 6% of global economy and average GDP of that country is increasing by 0.87% every year which makes them happiest persons all over the world and they give same importance to nation and nature. As per the recent statistics there are a countable number of people who are under poverty line. With this illustration it is clear that development of economy plays a vital role in eradicating the poverty
In conclusion, although, economic development leads to consumption of environment, it will mitigate or either shuns the problem of poverty which is a serious issue. In my opinion it is imperative to developed the economy to the global cause
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...reasing by 0.87% every year which makes them happiest persons all over the world and they giv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96068796069 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95738832535 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457002457002 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.231800801 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.214285714 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0714285714 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227708361479 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762745944853 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056016167633 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142124473137 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245450312376 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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