Some people say that educational success depends on good teachers, while others say that student attitude is important. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
It is often believed that in order to become academically successful, the role of teachers is vital, whilst some consider the factor of student’s attitude towards learning more important. In my opinion, I think that educators could make a huge difference in the life of their pupils with their numerous teaching skills.
On the one hand, it is universally acknowledged that a teacher is a nation builder which means he or she could transform the simple students into eminent personalities who can change the fate of their nations. Professors who have in-depth knowledge about their subjects, good communication skills, convincing power, and knowledge about using teaching-aids in their classrooms make the complex subjects easy to understand for students. For instance, a survey conducted by the Indian ministry of education revealed that IQ levels of university campus graduates are higher than those of college graduates. Therefore, it is clear that the role of a teacher is crucial in shaping a learner’s future.
On the other hand, learning behaviour, as well as the attitude of pupils towards their studies, are significant factors to achieve educational success. To illustrate it, if a student is not paying considerable attention to teachings or lessons that have been taught to him or her in school then he or she would unable to improve his grades. Without achieving the required percentage or marks in various subjects, students would not be able to get admission to their next course. Thus, it is the equal responsibility of a learner as well to put his hard efforts to grab knowledge from the educational institute and achieve a remarkable position in society with that piece of knowledge.
In conclusion, it is evident that both factors that are teacher’s abilities and student’s will towards education are mandatory to be succeeded academically. However, the role of a teacher is a little more prominent to aid learners to gain knowledge in an effective and better way.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28881987578 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11189577223 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.5657756475 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.916666667 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117330372243 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425945693776 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392014167146 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742678279896 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030993392012 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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