Some people say that government should not put money on building theaters and sports stadium. They should spend more money on medical care and education.
Do you agree or disagree?
Spending money by government in right sectors for the development of a nation has always been a challenging decision. It is asserted by some people that it would be a wastage of financial resources, if money is spent on sports and entertainment industry, rather a major chunk of it should be diverted to provide medical care and educational facilities to people. I do not endorse the notion and intend to discuss my views in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, one school of thought believes that education and health care is the basic necessity which plays a vital role in the growth of a country. This is because better education system creates career opportunities, whereas good medical care facilities ensure that every citizen is fit and healthy. As a result, people would remain productive towards the development of a nation. However, importance of entertainment can not be ignored. Nowadays, a lot of employment is being offered by these sectors as well as being a excellent source of enjoyment and exercise helping people to lead a healthy and joyful lifestyle.
On the other hand, I endorse the concept of spending money for the advancement of games and relaxation activities as these sectors are equally important. The prominent reason is that it makes people`s life colorful. As a matter of fact, there is no pleasure in living a life which is dull and boring. In contrast, if there is no enjoyment then people would find themselves as prisoners living a monotonous lifestyle. For instance, despite of excellent monetary benefits being provided in Saudi Arabia, people are moving to other countries as Saudi Government has implemented lot of restrictions on entertainment sources.
To fortify further, international sports events and movies boost the economy and GDP of countries. To quote an example, a popular Television series 'Games Of Thrones' has done a business of one thousand billion dollars worldwide. Thus, such shows, concerts and games contribute significantly in economy system by attracting worldwide audience. Not only this, these sectors also responsible to earn name and fame and bring international recognition to a country.
In conclusion, although education and medical care is essential, yet there is crucial role of sports and entertainment to make one`s life beautiful and meaningful in terms of enjoyment, fun, exercise and significant contribution in nation`s development by bringing international money and recognition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 528, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...fered by these sectors as well as being a excellent source of enjoyment and exerc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34096692112 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14313743135 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539440203562 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3852613628 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.611111111 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173185458477 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453052889204 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520443924857 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989371392425 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785993311234 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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