It is believed by some people that a huge amount of money is better to be spent on constructing some art places included, theaters, galleries and sport stadiums. In contarary, the rest of folk strongly reckon, money should be expensed on the items which seem more critical like, medical care and education. This essay deals with arguments for and against this controersial issue.
On the one hand, people who are in favour of doing some cultural things like building cinemas and so on so forth are concerned with cultures. In other words, on their point of view, these kinds of actions must be taken in order to preserve the traditions and cultures. In addition, there are somewhere which people especially youth can have fun and their spare times can be filled. Unless, we spend money on them, people will suffer from lacking of recreational facilities and cultural deprivation as well.
On the other hand, there are some people who strongly believe, government should benefit people by paying more attention to health and educational matters. As a matter of fact, they must be considered as the most crucial because they are related to body health or being littrate which are going to play a vital role in society. As an example, these days we are witnessing a lot of people are in danger of death because of not being able to afford the expensive expenses of treatment. So, more money should be devoted to healthcare rather than anything else.
In conclusion, a group of people are worry about spending budget on building gallaries or sport stadium while other are against and utter medical cares are more important. Basesd on the above mentioned points, in my perspective, if we wnat to have the best country, an equal amount of attention and budget should be paied for both medical and recreational facilities. In spite of that, we will face with some inevitable issues which takes a ot of time to be dealt with.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 440, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...with some inevitable issues which takes a ot of time to be dealt with.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in other words, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83939393939 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55970936424 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.331448095 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.071428571 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286891463972 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960715739136 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07959049563 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174440515401 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437995640374 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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