Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
A few people express the significance of maintaining the house and even their professional ambit perfectly organised and tidy. I too personally believe that a neat environment would certainly make the whole world a better place to dwell in and during the course of the essay I shall further justify my claims through relevant examples.
my strongest validation supporting my view in the favour of keeping your home organised, as for a housewife a tidy home would definitely be time saving, as a disorganised place may consume most of her precious time in searching for important items of day to day use, that is lying around carelessly in a messy house. Furthermore, keeping the place tidy would increase house wife’s efficiency and thereby, would certainly enable her to multitask, as nowadays most housewives are career oriented and properly organised house requires less struggle cleaning up and even maintaining a decent home. so give her ample time to shuffle between both her home life and work life with utmost grace. so definitely a properly maintained house reduces the upkeep cost and of course, in addition it boosts positive vibes.
my other strong validation in favour of keeping your own work place properly organised would truly reflect upon your organisation, and even would go a long way in helping you meet your targets in today’s competitive in a stipulated time. that’s why so many bosses of late are taking the help of business planners, strategist and even life coaches who come up with fantastic suggestions to meet the requirements of running a highly functional workplace with minimal efforts and optimal gains. For example, in many business houses the bosses come with clear instructions that their staff should first organise their tables properly before resuming work. No matter how busy or stressed they are and even if they have reached late to work, because then their workers will start doing it out of habit. Since, this kind of scheduling and structuring your work place comes with guaranteed success.
To summarize, the prominence of keeping things in proper place and even in a proper manner can never be gainsaid as it comes with maximum benefits, be it in your house or even in your work environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, well, as for, for example, in addition, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13709677419 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76791795607 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4367060881 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.25 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247952492717 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911371215237 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078266447641 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148618234552 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525845135731 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.