Some people say that it is individual’s responsibility to protect the environment while others say it is the government’s primary role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Since the start of industrial age, humans have altered the natural world at an unprecedented pace. Although many environmental advocates believe that the government’s main task is to safeguard the environment, others argue that it is every man’s duty to look after it. There are valid points supporting each side.
The national authorities are responsible to keep the natural habitats since they have the power to implement environmental protection laws. They can strictly impose prohibition against poaching, logging and illegal fishing, all of which are the main elements behind the dwindling numbers of species across many countries. They can also ban the the use of plastics, metric tons of which enter the oceans every year. In this way, the oceanic biodiversity that was severely loss due to plastic pollution may be restored. Finally, if the government start increasing carbon tax, this could put pressure on energy corporations to replace fossil fuels with renewable energy such as wind and solar power that may lessen the impact of human-caused global warming.
Individuals have their duties, too. They should be in charge in sustaining the ecosystem in order to secure their survival. Millions of people die each month due to the lack of clean water as rivers and lakes are continuously being polluted. This is why it is important for every household to properly dispose their waste and learn proper water conservation. Furthermore, research has shown that contaminated air caused by cigarette smoking and smoke-belching cars has resulted in thousands of death annually, mostly involving children suffering from lung diseases. Because of this, smokers need to understand the consequences of their bad habit to the society which may discourage them to smoke and motorists must subject their vehicles to emission testing regularly.
In conclusion, both the government and its citizens have their own roles to play in protecting the environment. I believe that through the sum of their efforts, planet Earth will have a sustainable future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, look, may, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39628482972 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93391641026 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668730650155 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3392347747 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.9375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0867559442769 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266342367732 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454380598901 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059190919836 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356487107356 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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