Some people say it is ok to use animal for our benefit, others says it is not good to exploit them. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.
Whereas some people say that using animals is acceptable for our own sake, however there are always opponents. While taking advantage of animals by doing some horrible experiments can be deemed as a wrong action, I totally believe that no one can deny the merits of some authorized tests.
It is widely accepted that with regards to science improvements, scientists are able to cure much more diseases in these days. These kinds of progresses depend on some test which cannot be done on human before achieving any success results. For instance, to find some permanent treatments for new viruses, some scientific experiments should be done on lab rats before any tests on human samples. As a result, many human lives could be saved due to successful flourishing consequences. Therefore, using animals as a test bed in monitored laboratory conditions could be beneficial, regarding views on human lives.
However, some experiments are really horrible for any kinds of living beings, let alone animals. It is because some of these researches are not held in ethical commitment situations. For example, many researchers are willing to do anything to fulfill their desires, such as some illegal biological tests which is run in US military due to trying to find some new biological weapons. While these inhuman activities and also taking advantages of animals in farms or everywhere else, should be banned and punishment should be placed for responsible persons’, there are plenty of advantages come with restricted tests on animals for all mankind.
Overall, although abusing animals for testing human researches or any forceful duty is completely wrong, if some experiments monitored by authorities, it could be fruitful for everyone. However, it can be predicted that with technology advancements, these tests would be vanishing in the near future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29491525424 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89467311336 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0325337942 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.153846154 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166108488205 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709012195285 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824974467563 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119980058052 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651239397797 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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