Some people say that it’s possible to tell a lot about person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought by some people that type of clothing reflects people’ temper and culture. That you can predict what kind of person is someone just looking at his suit or her dress. I can’t agree with this statement due a lot of reasons that I will describe in this essay.
Many years ago, when Ukraine was a part of USSR, there was a lack of textile manufacturing and it was very problematic to find an appropriate sort of clothes for everyone. Especially, women were always frustrated by impossibility of buying a desirable dress, which females from Europe were able to wear. As a result, they worn something they could find in USSR’s stores and if we can evaluate someone for his suit, we can also say that Soviet Union people were all the same.
However, there are some exceptions in this theory. There are a lot of smart people such as scientists, professors that never care much about what they wear. It has no sense for them. People of science are usually so caught up with scientific subjects that the choice of clothes counts as waste of time.
Contemporary psychologists say that if you want to understand who person is you should take into account a few details of his clothing, such as color, material and how does it fit person, loose or tight? As for me I never try to wear something that will reflect my type of mood. I can be in good spirits wearing black suit and be sad wearing white shirt. There is now connection. If young guy wears slim fit t-shirt someone can thinks he wants to be attractive and seeking for a girl. As a result, he has been married for 5 years and now the young man just wants to emphasize his muscles
In conclusion, there are mostly no connections between clothing and person’s character. To understand who someone is, you should at least to communicate and do not get misinterpretation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'wore'?
Suggestion: wore
...pe were able to wear. As a result, they worn something they could find in USSR'...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a person'.
Suggestion: who is a person
...ists say that if you want to understand who person is you should take into account a few d...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...how does it fit person, loose or tight? As for me I never try to wear something th...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
... guy wears slim fit t-shirt someone can thinks he wants to be attractive and seeking f...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'as for', 'at least', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'sort of', 'such as', 'all the same', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229333333333 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.162666666667 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0746666666667 0.0946595960268 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0426666666667 0.0501214627716 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.072 0.0437548338989 165% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.133333333333 0.122226691241 109% => OK
Participles: 0.024 0.0403226058552 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73602495244 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0213333333333 0.0326793684256 65% => OK
Particles: 0.00266666666667 0.00163938923432 163% => OK
Determiners: 0.0533333333333 0.0861772015684 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0293333333333 0.021408717616 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0213333333333 0.011925033212 179% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1856.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 329.0 316.048096192 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64133738602 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.29179331307 0.374742101984 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.215805471125 0.28420135186 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.12462006079 0.203846283523 61% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.09726443769 0.137316102897 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73602495244 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.037074148 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586626139818 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 65.8407576708 60.7387585426 108% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3529411765 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3694620331 49.517814964 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.176470588 127.492653851 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 40.9334882889 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.39423076923 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357403567747 0.332605444948 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.053300249901 0.102741220458 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0502889019518 0.0668466124924 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.477109430388 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14238449992 0.148594505496 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108626888169 0.134430193775 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718765271783 0.0742795772207 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.205858990134 0.324371583561 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0326633455471 0.0638462369009 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207441869369 0.228012699653 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584678395625 0.058150111329 101% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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