Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
With the advancements in technology especially with the invention of gadgets like mobile and tablets, entertainment options such as movies became closer to people in the form of online platforms. But in my opinion, the best of the movie experience can only be enjoyed in theatres. Both sides of the argument will be discussed in this essay.
Firstly, watching the movie on online platforms is very affordable and needs not to be a pre-planned activity. Movie watchers have a very good advantage of watching their favorite film any number of times without extra price, unlike theatres. Secondly, we can save the traveling cost and last-minute rushes by watching a movie in our own gadget. This kind of watching experience are most suitable for people who want to enjoy their movie pleasantly and in an uninterrupted way. Also, as we have an option of pause and resume available, we can watch at any pace and when we are free.
On the flip side, some of the 3D effects and greatest movie experiences can be possible only in movie theatres. For example, movies like Avatar are very good at VFX and 3D actions which can be enjoyed only in a theatre with special equipment provided. On the other hand, movie producers and directors are spending lots of money on creating a wonderful cinematic feel. They wanted to take the audience closer to the virtual reality using graphics, which can be enjoyed only on a big screen. To encourage them, we must watch those kinds of movies in the cinema theatres only.
In conclusion, watching movies on mobile has some benefits but cannot feel the originality in terms of audio and clarity. Instead of watching them in theatres encourages the movie makers and we can enjoy the cinematic experience as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an uninterrupted way" with adverb for "uninterrupted"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ant to enjoy their movie pleasantly and in an uninterrupted way. Also, as we have an option of pause an...
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Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...hen we are free. On the flip side, some of the 3D effects and greatest movie experienc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89597315436 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65267129797 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543624161074 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4515798482 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.2666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157081046325 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624054880211 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337565063432 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975720828536 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304774913358 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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