Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It is sometimes to argued that people should watch films in the cinema for a fully enjoy experience instead of seeing films on individual digital devices. In my view, Even watching films in cinema is a more expensive method, it brings to people the completely relaxing time.
It could not be denied that nowadays movies can be watched in our phones and tablets easily due to the popular of filming website. However. it has several down sides. Firstly, watching in small screen devices will surely adversely affected to eyes. That is One of the reasons why people nowadays have eyesight issues than in the past. Second , Most of films in the internet do not have the copyright and sometimes the quality of film has been decrease. Therefore, people can not obtain fully the goodness, plot and quality of blockbusters
On the opposite, going to the cinema not only a legal way to fully enjoy the films as an artwork but also from very soon has become a beautiful culture in several countries. Even though people have to pay for a movie, but the cinema that is equipped with excellent sound and audition devices, will make every moments of movies become more reality for an fully enjoy experience for customers. Furthermore, Paying for a film is the contribution for a development of this industry. As the result, film manufacturers can produce a better quality in the future.
In conclusion, enjoy movies in the cinema is a worthy experience for every one even their can easily approach on the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58738541566 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531007751938 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0356794561 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.916666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26649087659 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968297862675 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735580819882 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163194899243 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536065806818 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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