By the great advancements in hand-held devices, people can watch movies on cell phones or tablets. Thus some argue that it is unnecessary to go to cinema because of the emergence of these screens. While I do not totally agree with this opinion in that the existence of movie theaters is significant to people, even if we have more convenient choice.
To begin with, the cinema is the only place that you can enjoy a movie completely due to its environment and well-armed equipments. Movie was becoming popular firstly from cinema a century ago. Movie industry's development also represents human-being's technology revolution. Nowadays, with more surrounded speakers and bigger screens, people could get more shocking experience from the movie in a theater. Imagine if you just watch the Avatar, Star Wars or Avengers on hand-held devices, you can never enjoy the moment that you have in the cinema. On the contrary, the IMAX-screen theater is the first choice of watching them.
Addtionally, watching a moive in theater is not only for fun alone, but it is also a kind of socializing method. People in general would not watch movies in the cinema on their own, instead, it is a good place for them watching with family memebers and friends together. Especially the lovers would select the cinema for them as the second place for dating, since it is a perfect choice after having a dinner at a restaurant, which is the first place.
In all, it is of great convenience in anytime you want to watch movies on cell phones or tablets. However, the importance of cinema will never be overlooked due to its watching experience and socializing feature.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...watch movies on cell phones or tablets. Thus some argue that it is unnecessary to go...
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Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'having dinner'.
Suggestion: having dinner
...ing, since it is a perfect choice after having a dinner at a restaurant, which is the first pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, so, thus, well, while, in general, kind of, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9247311828 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7403115579 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7570680954 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135470081844 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519542350221 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332122001103 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904994591935 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249678947896 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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