Private schools are mushrooming because they provide better education. Unlike government funded schools they charge a fee. Still, parents send their children to private schools. Some people, however, feel that private schools should be banned because children going to those schools have an unfair advantage over those attending government schools. I don’t agree with this view.
Children attending private schools tend to get higher grades than those attending government schools. Private schools charge a fee. If they don’t provide good education, they will run out of business. Perhaps the biggest argument against private schools is that only rich students can attend them. Poor families still depend on government funded schools. Since many of these schools don’t provide quality education, the poor students are at a disadvantage. However, this problem cannot be solved by eliminating private schools from the scene.
Everyone should have access to quality education. In a country like India parents invest too much in their children’s education. I know families that borrow money to send their children to private schools. Instead of banning private schools, the government needs to do something to improve the quality of state-funded schools. If they were providing quality education, parents wouldn’t be sending their children to private schools in the private place.
Teachers at government schools are better qualified than private school teachers. They land the job after scoring good marks in various eligibility tests. By contrast, many private school teachers merely possess a degree. Still, their hard work ensures that their students have good grades. Many government school teachers, by contrast, lack commitment. They are not accountable to any. They will receive their salary whether their students pass their exams or not. This needs to change. The government should introduce a grading system that measures the performance of teachers as well. Those who lack commitment and sincerity should be dismissed promptly.
To conclude, banning private schools will not solve the problems plaguing our education system. Private schools address a need and that need should be met. In order to ensure that everyone has access to quality education, the government needs to improve the standards of government schools.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66197183099 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63769991115 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49014084507 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6120121019 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8333333333 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 7.06120827912 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191423709047 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605073768856 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473671897652 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131425504949 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485472657583 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.66 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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