Some people say watching TV is bad for children in all ways, others say it is good for children to get knowledge.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are different opinions about watching TV. Some say kids should never watch TV but others believe kids learn a lot by watching TV.
Today, all human life has been embraced by technology. Even people's entertainment is dependent on technology.Shrinking apartments, of course, are another reason for choosing television as entertainment and Children spend most of their free time watching television.Watching television too much is a disadvantage for children, first, television programs with fantasy or war themes that are just a waste of time.Secondly, television programs to experiment with children, and children have no incentive to experiment with and study science.And lastly, it can be said that television has many skills, including a lack of dating, a lack of ability to take part, and a lack of confidence in children.
It's true that television has disadvantages for kids, but it also has many benefits, depending on the type of program children choose to watch.If television executives consider programs for children that are more educational, this would increase children's knowledge in every field.For example, by seeing these programs, children can plan their day-to-day tasks well and can learn many skills to solve their problems.
In conclusion,I believe that the usefulness or ineffectiveness of television depends on the type of programs it has and parents can be a good guide for their children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45701357466 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32762900593 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597285067873 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.249101398 49.4020404114 446% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.0 106.682146367 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8333333333 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8333333333 7.06120827912 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302956327196 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149943862983 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570816888287 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185092616871 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038971181533 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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