Some people say young people should be completely free to choose their future job but others think young people must be more realistic in their choice.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are a number of people who believe that the younger generation has to have freedom in their job and career choices. Meanwhile, there are those who argue with it and declaim that the youngsters should not pursue their dreaming job, but concentrate on reality instead. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the argument and then I will give my own opinion on the matter.
On one side of the argument are those who support young people in their desire to independently choose their future job. This is because every person has to fulfil their dreams and a satisfying career choice is one of the essential parts of human happiness. Otherwise, a person will find that their life happens to be miserable and daunting. For example, one of the financial experts having a fortune on his bank accounts, suddenly committed suicide due to the fact that he hated financial consulting and was spending his whole life doing it.
On the other side, modern people are extremely influenced by social media and almost everyone does not want to pursue a traditional career path and want to be a self-employed blogger, model or fitness star. Thus, some people argue that it is not possible for each and every young adult to survive without having in high demand occupation and that is why they have to be more realistic in their job choices. To illustrate, plenty of young people who did not want to complete a former education and work on traditional jobs ended up without an education and unemployed.
In my opinion, both sides of the argument have their merits. On balance, however, I believe that a young person at the moment of choosing their future occupation has to consider both their soul desire as well as demand on their career choice. From my perspective, it is always necessary to have a back-up plan in case of failure. For instance, if somebody finds themselves unemployed, they can always change their career path on the available at the moment.
In conclusion, having considered both opinions, I think that young people have to take into account both sides and remember that they are living in turbulent times. In fact, there is no safe option for choosing a future job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80158730159 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55009028143 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513227513228 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7339126732 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.4375 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374018380757 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120078647614 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798871861692 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203626347057 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364905447786 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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