For some people, shopping is not just about buying what is necessary, but a form of entertainment. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Give your opinion and examples from your experience.
In recent times, many people believe purchasing necessities not only their daily essentials but also consider as a form of recreational activity. This essay will agree with this trend as a positive development because of the development of supermarkets and giving them a broad way of maintaining their health.
Nowadays, Individuals do not have enough time to spend on buying their basic things because of their hectic scheduled, so that they tend to choose a place where they can buy all things together with their near and dear ones. Also, shopping malls contain not only their required products but also serving an abundant variety of enjoyable activities. Therefore, people prefer to go shopping in such places where they can buy and fun activities together. For example, compared to the past time, most young ones prefer to go on shopping with friends and families to big malls as they can have huge facilities such as dining together, watching a movie while acquiring their products.
The other reason supporting this trend is they can maintain their health with doing this activities. Because such kind of locations are spread in wider areas , so that to acquire all things they have to walk for a longer time that eventually assist them to keep them away from detrimental disease like obesity. For instance, it was published in one of the articles that the young ones who are visiting supermarkets at every weekends have a good health and its works as stress buster process for them.
In conclusion, although shopping activities needs more time to consume, it has a plethora of benefits which cannot be neglected. I believe that authorities should create more places like this with new facilities that not only can save person’s valuable time but also give them a chance to have fun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01333333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61496618433 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2091198848 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.727272727 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104881601381 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044583421663 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228904041558 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666662188715 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259769566198 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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