Some people tend to commit crimes, is the society to blame?
what are the causes, and who is the responsible?
No one is born criminal in this world. We must agree to the fact that any individual commits crime due to lust, greed or hunger. It is not the society we should hold accountable for the crimes happening. We will discuss the reasons and shed light on the concerns responsible for the same.
Firstly, nowadays youth has created lust undue materialistic things to show off in the society. They want expensive attire, bikes or cars, even if their parents can not afford such things. When parents refused to provide all these stuff then youth opt the wrong ways to acquire. Newspapers are full of such incidents, wherein student from engineering and medical streams found offenders of robbery or stealing. Secondly, unemployment is also largely responsible for crimes happening. People are finding hard to earn their bread and facing issues to live a normal life. Such circumstances also force human to commit crime. In the year of 2018, 40% of crime recorded in the provience of Delhi has been committed by an age group of 19-30 years and majority of them were unemployed.
Finally, tv and social sites are also contributing in increased number of crimes. Violent criminal shows on tv and fake fame on social media encouraged youngsters to perform unlawful acts. There are so many live crime scenes are available on Youtube and facebook, which has happened only to become popular.
To sum up, society should not be blamed for crimes. Rather, we need to do root cause analysis to eradicate the problem for forever. Collective, parents, schools, and governments should shoulder responsibility and take preventive measures to prevent youth and society from crimes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... prevent youth and society from crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65392271649 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676363636364 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5586362083 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140579455484 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403293828903 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499023397218 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803472878876 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502625711898 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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