Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Every country is focusing on reducing crime rate for the positive social and economical growth. Some argue that the ultimate method to demolish criminal activities is long imprisonment to the criminals. Whereas, other people think that several alternatives can be utilised to reduce the crime rate of the country before the crime could happen. According to me, There are numerous ways to pull down the statistics of criminal acts.
Reducing crimes with long duration of the imprisonment is considered as efficient by a few amount of people. It is thought that by doing this, criminal would be punished accordingly. Precisely, they would understand the consequences of attempting crime and would not dare to repeat. For Instance, extended period of prison would keep them separated from family. These would result in realisation of if they had not committed the crime, they would have been with their family. Hence, longer prison might make them feel homesick and would be eager to live ordinary life.
However, some thinks that unnecessary period of imprisonment would lead to frustrating behaviour and provoke prisoner to attempt more crime for revenge. If consideration for the alternatives taken, teenagers or children could be taught about consequences of criminal activities. As a result, they would be more responsible. Social activities can be performed for adults and voluntarily services of social awareness can be given to everyone who wants to be away from these unwanted situations. For already prisoned, skills improvement would encourage them to start new life after the discontinuation of the punishment.
Therefore, reduction of the crime is not specifically done in prison. In my opinion, lowering down the crime numbers could be started by educating individual at the early age as possible and for adults, social improvement opportunities can be arranged rather than just longer imprisonment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... crime rate for the positive social and economical growth. Some argue that the ultimate me...
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Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... is long imprisonment to the criminals. Whereas, other people think that several altern...
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Line 1, column 345, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... country before the crime could happen. According to me, There are numerous ways to pull down t...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: 'few amounts'.
Suggestion: few amounts
...sonment is considered as efficient by a few amount of people. It is thought that by doing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42140468227 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97286227237 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5905370191 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3529411765 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179100020476 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641186605405 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610040498611 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122697248548 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610330464372 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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