Some people think that the best way to run a business in within the familyWhat are the advantage and disadvantage.

Essay topics:

Some people think that the best way to run a business in within the family
What are the advantage and disadvantage.

While the strategies for opening a business is varrying person to person and some prefer to run an enterprise within the family. To run a business with in family has both merits and demerits which I will portray in this essay in subsequent paragraphs.

As far as my views are concerned, it brings a lot of prose. The predominant advantage is stability, final position typically determine who leads the business and as a result there is usually longevity in leadership, which results in overall stability within the organization. Leaders stay in that positions until a life event such as illness or retierment and a death will not occur. Moreover, everyone knows about each others positive and negative points so they work according to their strengthn areas and they will co-operate with each other judicously to acquire the goals of the organisation. In addition, they will work with all their work spirit because their own sentiments are attached with the organisation and if the firm will go in downfall then it automatically impact on them to ward of they worked hard for the company due to the aftermath of these companies will always good. Hence, this is the reason, why family business are almost sucessful.

It is commonly said that every coin has two sides so it also its another darkside. Primarily con is family conflicts, well conflicts are bound to happen at any firm but sometimes after a passage of time it altered in terrible conflicts, because the family members are involved in it due to this then it can be more difficult to solve and results in difficult ending. For instance, in 2005, the famous dispute between the sons of reliance industries founder DhiruBhai Ambani, Mukesh and Anil, divided India's largest petro chemical manufacturer when all was said and done make retain control of the petrochemical business while Anil became chairman of Reliance capital, reliance Communications and Reliance energy in addition, sometimes the primitive family members does not allowed his new generation to try the new experiments in the company to ward off the fear of awful outcomes, which might be helpful in tremendous strides of the organisation.

To recapitulate, everyone has their own use I do not deny any of them but I closeted that to run a business in the family has a lot of benefits. Although it has some disadvantages but its advantages overweight the disadvantages.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86956007081 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.619963806 49.4020404114 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.153846154 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7692307692 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116752935861 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508885331507 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582678197194 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992474072811 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704584806127 0.056905535591 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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