Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In today’s world the crime rate in a city is increasing at an alarming rate. Not a day passes when we do not read or hear of murders, rape, kidnapping, burglary and so on. A segment of the society has an opinion that all crimes are equal and the criminals should be punished harshly, while other believe that the those who commit low level of crime should be made to do voluntary work. Whether a criminal should be made to do social service or put behind the bars will be discussed further in this essay.
To embark on, everyone is not born criminal but when a man is denied the right to live the life he believes in; he has no choice but to become an outlaw. A helpless person who is involved in petty criminal activities should be made to do community services like planting trees, cleaning roads, working for a charitable trust and so on rather than punished harshly by the law. For Example, a child who has stolen a loaf of bread from a shop for his starving family should not be detained, instead should be made to do social welfare because the motive of stealing is not bad. Moreover, if a person involved in a crime knows his course is wrong and repairs the evil should be given a second chance by the law and order of the country to live life freely and with dignity.
On the contrary, criminals involved in heinous criminal activities such as killings, rapes, abduction and so on should be penalised hardly. For example, the famous rape case that took place Delhi in which girl was brutally assaulted and severely injured, the convicted were punished hard by the law and order of the nation. The background of the criminal and the motif of the crime should be considered before punishing someone. Doing unpaid and charitable work will not reform the offenders. They will recommit the crimes more seriously. Furthermore, the culprits should be locked up in jails to make them feel guilty for the crime they have done and understand and feel the pain for the victim.
To conclude, I completely agree that the law of the country should consider that someone with no criminal record if involved in slight misconduct with no objective must be made to do community welfare, rather than the serial killers who should be locked up in order to maintain peace and harmony in the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61219512195 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4582764574 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3284225878 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.066666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240225420378 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884895570876 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712645429916 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161697404558 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028430244147 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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