Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In today’s world, the crime rate in a city is increasing at an alarming rate. Not a day passes when we do not read or hear about the country’s lawbreaking pursuits. Although, a segment of the society argues that all crimes are equal and the criminals should be punished harshly, others believe that those who commit low-level crimes should be made to do voluntary work. Whether a criminal should be made to do social service or put behind the bars will be discussed further in this essay.
To embark on, everyone is not born criminal but when a man is denied the right to live the life he believes in; he has no choice but to become an outlaw. A helpless person who is involved in petty criminal activities should be made to do community services like planting trees, cleaning roads, volunteering for a charitable trust and so on rather than being unfairly disciplined by the law to change their behaviour towards mankind. For Example, a kid who has stolen a loaf of bread from a store intending to feed his starving parents should not be detained but should be made to do social welfare so that he can be an asset to the society.
On the contrary, criminals involved in heinous criminal activities such as killings, rapes, abduction and so on should be penalized hardly. For example, Delhi’s popular rape case in which the girl was brutally assaulted and severely wounded, the accused were punished hard by the law and order of the nation. Before being prosecuted, the history of the suspect and the justification of the offense should be understood. Doing unpaid and charitable work will not reform the offenders. They will be more diligent about committing a crime. Of the fact, the culprits should be locked up in jails to make them feel guilty and understand the pain for the victim.
To conclude, I completely agree that the law of the country should consider that someone with no criminal record if involved in slight misconduct with no objective must be made to do community welfare, rather than the serial killers who should be locked up to maintain peace and harmony in the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80054644809 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67265770846 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2750270681 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257084310583 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977848284371 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674600913973 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171127793093 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199693175352 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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