Some people think that certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars.
To what extent do you agree?
<span style="color: rgb(53, 53, 53); font-family: Raleway; font-size: 17px; white-space: normal;">Crimes in many countries have gone beyond the alarming rate and it is a common practice to put convicted people behind bars. A segment of society opines that not all crimes are equal and repercussion of harsh sentence for all offences is uncivilised. They outline the need for unpaid community service as punishments for mild-offenders and youngsters. I believe that certain offenders should be given non-custodial sentences. </span><br style="color: rgb(53, 53, 53); font-family: Raleway; font-size: 17px; white-space: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(53, 53, 53); font-family: Raleway; font-size: 17px; white-space: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(53, 53, 53); font-family: Raleway; font-size: 17px; white-space: normal;">The predominant reason for me to believe that unpaid community services like cleaning streets, planting trees, and working for charity instead of prison is that many offenders are not born-criminals and the circumstance often incite them to commit a felony. Besides, when such unpremeditated convicts are expelled from the society, they incline to re-offend in isolation as there is none to accept them. Apart from this, juvenile delinquents should be rehabilitated by indulging them in community services.</span><br style="color: rgb(53, 53, 53); font-family: Raleway; font-size: 17px; white-space: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(53, 53, 53); font-family: Raleway; font-size: 17px; white-space: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(53, 53, 53); font-family: Raleway; font-size: 17px; white-space: normal;">On the contrary, brutal offenders who commit heinous crimes like premeditated murder, vandalism, abduction, hijacking, rapes and so on should be punished to set examples in the society. Thus, the background of a criminal and the motif of a crime should be considered. For instance, if a teenager steals food from a store as his mother is starving is a completely different scenario than someone robbing an old lady. The former deserves a second chance while the latter should be imprisoned.</span><br style="color: rgb(53, 53, 53); font-family: Raleway; font-size: 17px; white-space: normal;"><br style="color: rgb(53, 53, 53); font-family: Raleway; font-size: 17px; white-space: normal;"><span style="color: rgb(53, 53, 53); font-family: Raleway; font-size: 17px; white-space: normal;">To recapitulate, someone with no previous record of crime and a sensible reason for a slight misconduct should be treated differently than a serial killer. The objective of the law is to maintain peace in the society, not to punish people. Thus unpaid community services is a great option to let some convicted lament for their crime.</span>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2082, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'robs'.
Suggestion: robs
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Line 1, column 2738, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e in the society, not to punish people. Thus unpaid community services is a great op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, so, thus, while, apart from, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2459.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 6.47105263158 5.12529762239 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.3019828901 2.80592935109 153% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497368421053 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 203.585550541 49.4020404114 412% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 204.916666667 106.682146367 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0758842515473 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049510097483 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468947086817 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758842515473 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.0946893788 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.84 12.4159519038 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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