Some people think that children should go to kindergarten before attending primary school, while others believe that is better for children to stay all day with their families. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is believed by many individuals that kids must take admission in the infant schools before entering grade school. Whereas, others do not support this view and feel that children should remain with the family for the whole day. In my opinion, kindergarten education in recent generations has a huge demand as it helps the pupil in career development. Although family time is equally important to have better relationships.
On the one hand, Nursery institutes are essential and productive for babies to have a good understanding of school education and discipline. Especially in the urban areas where both the parents are working employees and does not carry time to spend with their children. These platforms benefit them in teaching the right activities in a correct manner for an instance, the students from kindergarten are already aware of the punctuality in schools which gives them advantages as compare to the schoolboys who have joined now.
On the other hand, Family time is pivotal for the kids as well as for their family members to have strong bonding and emotional attachment. Spending early days of life with family members is useful to build concrete relations which certainly will make more affectionate. Furthermore, the presence of offspring in a home can create happiness and lovely environment
In conclusion, the infant centre for learning has anyhow been beneficial for the society as well as for the family to raise competitive kids which help the baby in future to have great success in a career by creating a strong base.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, as for, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1137254902 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80186679133 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4643450934 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.4 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2171955033 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847528335764 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563589593707 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125979456563 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697484027516 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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