Some people think competitive sports, such as football, are valuable because they can gather people with different ages and cultures together. Some think competitive sports can cause problems because people are from different groups and countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Every year players play domestic and international level games which are helpful to bridge cultural and age differences; however, games also lead to some harmful effects when these get played on the international level. This essay will discuss how competitive games benefits and affects adversely by analyzing perspectives of both ends.
At the onset, when athletes from different cultures play together, it resolves many conflicts. Games make relationships stronger and ease cultural differences. When people from different locations perform any group activity, they share their cultural norms and believes; at that time, players from one team get interested in their counterpart's traditions and customs. To quote an example, nowadays the Punjabi kabaddi team is well aware of Maharashtra because of the national games.
In contrast, international games increase world tension due to competition which sometimes also causes injuries. Without any qualms, players from different nations play together and share their thoughts, it is also worth noting that they are always the competitors and certainly want to defeat their counterpart and they always keep in their mind that the opposite team is a competitor. For instance, a cricket match became a war when the Indian team beat Pakistan in 2008 and at that time Pakistan players started creating violence. In short, games boost differences between nations.
In conclusion, it is clear that games not only beneficial to reduce age and cultural gap, these also sometimes cause violent effects which, however, in my opinion, can be reduced by educating people and games must be repetitive because of its advantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55252918288 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79230530512 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622568093385 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8628282153 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.727272727 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201437834894 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702001852803 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443476319076 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117440538959 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042107127384 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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