Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although it is sometimes thought that environmental challenges are enormous for people to solve. other people think these challenges would remain unsolved if people do nothing about them. In my opinion, people have a major role to play in solving environmental issues in our communities.
On the one hand, some people think that the challenges cannot be prevented. earthquakes, global warming and so on cannot be prevented by man because they are natural occurences beyond man influence. To illustrate, the geographical position of a nation determines the likelihood of experiencing these shortcomings. In addition, people think it is solely the government responsibility to prevent environmental issues. This is because the government have access to the fund and resources which can be used to early detect global warning, earthquakes and so on.
On the other hand, it is often believed that people can help solve environmental issues and i agree. The activities of man directly or indirectly influence the stability of the planet, which result into earthquakes, tornadoes, global warming, mudslides and so on. For example, the continuous deforestation makes the environment prone to global warming. Furthermore, people tend to be disobedient to government advice on evacuation from areas prone to disasters. A case in point is the people living at the Batagarawa area of Freetown. The government tried relocating them to another area to prevent them been killed during mudslides but declined. this lead to the death of several thousand of the citizens.
In conclusion, considering other peoples opinion, i think the people have a major role to play in the reducing the consequences of global warming in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43333333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14794116967 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540740740741 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4426506325 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.6875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192362262635 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681774069186 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553057037593 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126140829362 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488568659256 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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