some people think that having a set retirement age for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain worker deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age
Do you agree or disagree?
which type of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement.
It is irrefutable that human body does not allow to work after certain age limit. Advocates are of the view that there should be a prescribed limit for retirement age while opponents postulate that it should depend upon the job profile of worker. However, I strongly agree with latter view and this essay intends to elucidate this point in following paragraphs.
To begin with, strength of the human body parts reduced according to the type of work individuals do in their respective industry for long time. Body parts are like components of a mechanical machine when these equipment are used for longer period, it losses its efficiency after certain years. For example, army of any nation retire the people after the age of forty-five from teams which are specifically for war front because their knee joints become weak after working for long tenure which does not allow them to run faster in case of war. Therefore, it is imperative to decide the retirement age depending upon the type of occupation people are involved.
Further to this, if retirement age will be fixed then it will be having repercussion on employment opportunities in the country. This is because, elder staff will not leave the organization for certain years, and there will be less job positions to be filled by youngster. Consequently, unemployment will rise, and also, it hampers the productivity of companies. Although, old age people have experience to handle the work, but there approach towards change and innovation is limited as compared to young blood. Therefore it suppress the growth of company, which has more number of elderly people. To justify this, a recent study by Pension Department of Government of India reveals that state-run department is having sixty percent less efficiency as compared to private firms because government has to follow age limit criteria and do not allow young generation to mainstream while their counterpart allow this.
To recapitulate, the aforementioned statements provide plausible arguments in favor of deciding the retirement age depending upon the job profile. According to me, There are four major category of people which enjoy this benefit; labor, security forces, factory workers, and people with low eye vision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20936639118 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77603402834 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570247933884 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4549315775 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.066666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187988695594 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627583005542 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416868191091 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112453655265 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295152543879 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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