Some people think that higher institutions should concentration more on academic subjects such as history and the physical sciences, while others think that they should concentrate more on practical subjects such as car mechanics and cookery, etc.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is commonly believed by many that university education should target more on academic subjects, while some other belive that practical subjects should be given more preference at higher educational institutions. In this essay, I will examine both the views and provide my opinion.
To begin with, academic subjects are essential for the background knowledge and cultural awareness. if these subjects got removed from the curriculum or given lower preference then younger generation would lack their interest in those subjects. Moreover, professions such as journalism , archaeologist and professors require immense study about history and other academic subjects which could not be gained in a better way than higher education institutions. Also, there is a very famous saying that 'a nation will soon lost his existence, if its youth has forgotten its history'. Every youngster should remember the sacrifices of freedom fighters and their national culture including food, language, dressing style. It could be plausible if universities give more preference to academic subjects.
On the other side, In this competitive world, practical knowledge of subjects had become a necessity. Most of the companies hire those students who have some practical studies. also to mark one's place in this competent world, everyone has to earn extraordinary skills thus having studied practical subjects such as engineering and mechanics is beneficial.
In my opinion, universities should focus more on practical courses rather than theoretical courses. Afterall every student pursue higher studies with a motive to grab a high-profile job and earn decent salary which is easily possible if one has learned practical subjects.
In conclusion, both academic studies and practical studies are essential part of higher studies syllabus hence both the courses have their own advantages. however, I feel that colleges should concentrate on practical studies as they offer better opportunities of job for students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, as for, as to, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66112956811 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90414529761 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611295681063 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5758220502 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288611660357 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886742943116 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722034965138 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1556840598 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514938776609 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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