Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In the past few years, tourist industry has grown tremendously. It is commonly believed by many that visitors should follow local traditions and customs while some other people believe that they should bring their own cultural values and host countries should accept it happily. In this essay, I will discuss both the views and provide my opinion about the same.
On one side, it is a matter of fact that most of the tourists visit other countries just to learn about the local traditions and customs. Also it gives immense pleasure and pride to local people when visitors imitate their rituals. For example, during festive seasons in India, the number of tourist population increases gradually, this is because they want to experience our way of cherishing festivals such as holi, diwali and other national events. Moreover if visitors will try the local customs, it will bring an additional source of income for localites who trade cultural dresses, accessories, local food and drinks.
On the other side, if visitors bring along their own cultural values then also it would be beneficial for the host country’s people. This way people could learn international or other country’s traditions while living at their hometown.
In my opinion, visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior as this will also raise their interest to visit other countries and this may also expand job opportunities in term of local guides, artists, chefs and craftsmen.
To conclude, it is an argumentative matter that visitors should follow local traditions or host countries should accept cultural differences. Both these cases have their own benefits from vistor’s point of view and host country’s view but in my opinion, if local culture and traditions are followed by visitors than it would be more fruitful with regards to work opportunities, extra source of income to poor villagers or localites and widespread of cultural information.
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29936305732 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77880066453 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522292993631 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1900037188 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.666666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46942924358 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17330597584 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127364881816 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284945944262 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983201906218 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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