Some people think that illegal internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that they have little or no impact on artists.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is argued by a significant number of individuals that prohibited online downloads are impacting the music industry in a negative way. Whereas, others do not agree and consider it has minute or zero impacts on entertainers. Before reaching to a conclusion, both the views will be debated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, breaking the copyrights rules is a financial loss to music industry, as the original songs will be downloaded free of cost and artist will lose their work without any financial reward. Many artists work hard in generating masterpiece and for some it takes years to build such piece of work, but unfortunately, the leakage of their art is very common these days because of the internet excess to everyone. For instance, leakage of movie prints before the release date brings down the cinema business in India and many artists suffered with the job loss with this negligence in internet downloads.
However, various artists can nullified this effects of privacy leakage by raising their popularity and earn in return through other ways. Illegal downloads reaches to almost everyone without any hurdles, thus which directly increases the popularity of artists as viewer’s increase including paid and unpaid members. For instance, illegal downloads are accessible to everyone, similarly like YouTube channels are free to access and many artists try their talent on such platforms to become famous and various have succeeded in this and earned in on demand live shows in return.
To conclude, although artist have little impacts because they can earn this money from other ways, I believe that private content leakage is a financial damage to artist as well as industry. Therefore, government must take some steps to prevent these actions in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'financial damage'.
Suggestion: financial damage
...believe that private content leakage is a financial damage to artist as well as industry. Therefor...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ake some steps to prevent these actions in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24305555556 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67698200197 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3366504313 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.272727273 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173035012142 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635347076292 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404796022818 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10896771118 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362553761776 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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