While some people believe that intelligence is inherited, some others feel that intelligence can be acquired by learning. In my opinion, I consider that intelligence can be improved by constant efforts and dedication.
To begin with, intelligence is certainly innate. If the parents are intelligent, the children would acquire the genes responsible for a higher level of intelligence. For example, let us consider Albert Einstein, a renowned physicist in the world who had higher levels of the intelligent quotient. Similarly, his son also has shocking levels of IQ. Thus it can be seen how intelligence can be acquired as a parental gift.
Although intelligence is inborn, it does not mean that intelligence cannot be gained. If a person had the passion and pure desire, he can achieve anything in the world including knowledge. Hard work, dedication and learning are the building blocks of success. For instance, a bright student could accomplish a harder task very quickly, whereas a dull student puts more hours in learning to accomplish the same task in different methods.
Intelligence is a very crucial part of life. This essay emphasized the fact intelligence is not only inborn but can be improved by constant efforts. I believe that intelligence can be gained through motivation and learning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...his son also has shocking levels of IQ. Thus it can be seen how intelligence can be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27751196172 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08094591677 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607655502392 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2619931834 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7857142857 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270919319333 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104037774234 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101361396256 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195209325002 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119602312264 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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