some people think that it is better educate boys and girls in separate schools.Others, however believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both the views and give your own opinion
Due to educational advancement, school's education is more important for student. Many people believe that boys and girls pursue from separate school is more benefitial whereas few people think that education with mixed school is much better for both gender. This essay will discuss both views and state about this phenomenon.
One the one hand, people demand to education with separate schools is some extent beneficial for student. Firstly, student can more focus on study over other style. When students are joining with mixed class they like to get ready compare to routine.they are sometime waste them time behind to upgrade with trand. Secondly, students feel more comfortable compare to mixed class, they easily share their feeling infront of teacher. they can solve their problem without hasitation. Lastly, In separate class, students do not mature with all manner. Sometime, at Only boy's class, they are speak with rough language.
on the other hand, student educate with mix-class, they learn some manner which is needed in life. When boys and girls in group, they talk to each other with proper langugue and with respect. Actually, it is required in day to day life. consequetly, they are understand each other and co-operate to each other. Additionaly, student learn about fashion in proper manner. students prefer suitable clothes when they go with opposite gender. lastly, they learn more with discuss each other and feel compition to each other, there-fore, therefore, they improve their education scale.
In conclusion, As per my points of view, student have attended their class in mixed school, they are easily mixed with any person in any situation, furthermore, they have a knowledge about behavior of different gender is different partially. It would be helpful in future life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44661362088 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552083333333 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4687171696 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252385610617 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824250410475 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105544035073 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189166375134 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14634418225 0.056905535591 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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